Monday, September 29, 2014

Metaphor Poem_FNL

My Everything
MUTIARA PUTRI PRATIWI_112014075


 

Mother is my water and my fire
She calms me when I’m mad
She warms me up when I give up
Mother balances everything

7 comments:

  1. Don't forget to write down your name and student number...Thanks

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  2. Okay, Sir. Thanks for reminded me. I've wrote it on this post and others. :)

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  3. Nice Poem!
    The metaphor is well done and relates to the topic; no grammar and spelling errors.
    Good job!!!

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  4. Marvelous work.Always love your mother.

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  5. Achon: Sure chooon :D you have to do that too :)
    Mr.Calvin: Thanks, Sir. Hope my work better and better. :D
    Mas Lutfi: Thanks, bro! :)

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  6. don't just your mother the one who support you like fire and water ,but you also can support her with the same way like what she does :)

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